Added: Dec 1, 2008
From: koryargonic
Duration: 0:49
One of my favorites. Sorry for being so immodest. And no offense to Amish people.-Heres to a Simple Life-Punctured in the heartWith a poison dartThe dove fallsTo the muddyForest floorAnd it callsIt calls with the shriekOf a meek Amish whoreAnd weak and tremblingUpon the muddyForest floorThe dove is mockedBy its white-feathered kinThey have flocked hereTo seeThe dart that puncturedA muddy dove's heartSulliedThis must be sinOr this must be art
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Tags: art koryargonic original poem poems poet poetry poets prose sin spoken to word
Rating: 4.63 (16 ratings) Views: 108' favoriteCount='3 Comments: 12
WhyDidYouGoAndDoThat Says:
Dec 1, 2008 - Wow, great!
samdougken Says:
Dec 2, 2008 - You keep outdoing yourself. Dove. Muddy dove. Peace? Muddy peace? Peace isn't peace anymore?! WHERE IS THE LOVE!! My brain's going crazy! Okay. I've taken a few seconds to breathe. All I can say is..this was emotional piece for me. Haha. Obviously. 5 stahs for the aht.
janeczka Says:
Dec 2, 2008 - I like the loops, both internal and external. Good work!
dashpoet Says:
Dec 2, 2008 - .. "I am an artist, I have no guilt!" Patti Smith said that, I'm not sure if she was the first. I've never forgotten it.
YonatanHurwitz Says:
Dec 2, 2008 - Kory,The image of the muddy, poisoned dove is very powerful. I particularly enjoyed the last line. Five stars, man.
DavidRandallCurtis Says:
Dec 2, 2008 - I need to visit you channel more often. Every time I do I am quite blown away by your writing. 5 stars.
ninapoetry Says:
Dec 2, 2008 - Incredible.
ellyunfortunetly Says:
Dec 2, 2008 - This is just amazing. I love the question you offer us. The thought. That this must be sin, or art. I love it. You are blossoming. We've noticed.
TheFlawedPoet Says:
Dec 5, 2008 - Great from beginning to end ...it must be art!
justpoetry Says:
Dec 26, 2008 - Added to my favorites - 5*!
justmusic247 Says:
Dec 30, 2008 - stunning.
jimmymccombs Says:
Dec 1, 2008 - REAL NICE ONE MAN