Added: Nov 20, 2008
From: eliilo
Duration: 0:46
so here is the next part! for the next chapter i want 15 comments on both parts!!COMMENT SUBSCRIBE ADD ME AS YOUR FRIEND!!!--------------story right here....No not here there:Kyle drove to the hospital as fast as he could.When they arrived there, they ran to the elevator to get to joes room.They ran in his room but it was empty no one was in it!vanessa:where are they??(she asked kyle scared)kyle:cool down, we will look for a nurse or a doctor and ask them where joe is ok?vanessa nodded and kyle grabbed here hand and ran out of the room, looking for someone to ask, but they couldnt find anyone.''we are in a FUCKING hospital there has to be anyone!!'' and then a nurse walked over to them.nurse:are you here for joseph adam jonas??vanessa:YES i am!!what happened to him??did he die?is he still alive..TELL me!!!nurse:calm down, young lady..Nothing happened to him and he did not die he is still alive, we just had to bring him in another room on a different station, because he--vanessa:he what??nurse:would you let me finish my sentence?*she said seriously but smiled*vanessa:yeah sure im just nervous*kyle chuckled*nurse:well, dont freak out, but he woke up!vanessa jumped up and first hugged Kyle and than the nurse.The nurse told them were Joe was laying now, but he still needed rest so it would be better when kyle wouldnt come in, so kyle left.Vanessa ran up to joes room and was totally out of breath when she lightley knocked on the door.She could hear footsteps coming closer and her heart started to beat even more and she couldnt breath.Nick opened the door smiling but it faded when he saw vanessa breathing really hard, gasping for air and holding her chest.Nick:what is wrong??(he ran over to her to help he in the room, but she wouldnt move or talk) KEVIN! come here, i think she is having a panic attack!!Kevin jumped up out of his chair and helped nick holding vanessa.They carried her in the room and laid her on a second bed, because she fainted.Joe:*weak voice*what is wrong with..her..kevin:i dont know joe, we have to ask her when she wakes up and i hope that will be soon.nick:dont worry she will be up soon, she is a strong young woman and i think she was just nervous to meet you again joe.*he said smiling proudly*joe:i-i hope so..(he looked down at the scars all over his body and a tear slid down his face onto the white pillow.)at this moment vanessa woke up, looking around and took a deap breath, finally giving her lungs the air that they needed for over 15 minutes.nick:are you ok?vanessa:i guess so, i just had this really weird dream.I dreamt that joe woke up and there was this nurse and kyle...kevin:it wasnt a dream.she looked up and saw joe smiling at her, she blushed hard.''oh my god! thank you!'' she said while she walked to joe and kissed his cheek.''im sorry for everything I did to you! you know that dont you?!'' he nodded and grabbed her hand...''i guess we will leave you two alone for a couple minutes, we will be back in 2 hours ok?''kevin asked and vanessa and joe nodded.Vanessa sad down on a chair next to joe, but joe shook his head and patted the bed to show her that she should lay next to him.''Joe there is not enough place and i will hurt you''..''no you wont hurt me, dont be stupid i will enjoy it..you remember im still a bad boy and i like your attention so come here sexy! we can talk later!''he laughed weekly and vanessa laid down next to him and joe cuddled up to her covering her with the blanket.They both smiled from ear to ear and vanessa laid her hand down on his stomach, but he winced in pain so she pulled it away very quick.vanessa:Im sorry..SEE i hurt you!!(she tried to stand up, but joe grabbed her hand and pulled her back to him even closer than befor)joe:no..you didnt!(he kissed her on the lips but vanessa pulled away from him)vanessa:not that i dont like your kiss, but can i see the..uhmm the scars?joe:i dont know if you want to see them, it looks horrible and i dont want to scare you off..again.(he looked sad)vanessa:lets forget the past..and now show me your stomach or i HAVE to take off your shirt!!joe:i like the second part better*he smirked*vanessa:so you will let me see them??joe:sure..i guess!oh-uh what will happen?? remember i want 15 comments on chapter 18 part1 and on part2!!!(and not just 'post more' or 'i want more'..tell me what you think about the story;))
Channel: Entertainment
Tags: badboy eliilo fanfic joe jonas onetruemedia
Rating: 5.00 (3 ratings) Views: 539' favoriteCount='3 Comments: 18
FranMH94 Says:
Nov 20, 2008 - LOL! i love it! It was so cute!! even though the PERVERTED part it was still cute!! Poor Joe, let's wish that nothing bad happens to them!!
nickjonaslover1232 Says:
Nov 20, 2008 - oo my nick jonas such a great story u have 2 post another one 2niteit was really good i loved it plz make another one pwetty pwease
musiccloverx Says:
Nov 20, 2008 - its reeeli goood :]
atombex13 Says:
Nov 20, 2008 - Postt Sooooon Seriousllyyy :D
heartdajonasbrothers Says:
Nov 20, 2008 - omg wowi love this story =)is vanessa, vanessa hudgens? or i diferen vannessa?more right now!
godsprayerworrior Says:
Nov 20, 2008 - omg post more!!!oh n i didnt comment on the one before this one but i have to say i love the part when nessa snuck up on kyle lol
h2ocleo3 Says:
Nov 20, 2008 - i love it! im so glad that joe is alright! but i wish he wasent such a "bad boy".
imawesomeinsomanyway Says:
Nov 20, 2008 - awesome job cant wait they were really good
pirategurl46 Says:
Nov 20, 2008 - I LOVE THIS STORY....poor joe...but...YAY HE WOKE UP!
softballchix000 Says:
Nov 20, 2008 - LOVED IT post soon
angelicalyluvsblu Says:
Nov 20, 2008 - i loved it xDi was really mad at kevin before though because he was blaming vanessa and it wasnt her fault!! lol okay done with my little rant now (i love kevin in real life though)
sambethpilon Says:
Nov 20, 2008 - omgg this is great you have to post a nother one quick
ilovemenet17 Says:
Nov 20, 2008 - POST!plz
xjonasx29 Says:
Nov 21, 2008 - love it post now ive been secretly watching i dont think i commented?!lol.post when u see this please.
eliilo Says:
Nov 21, 2008 - its vanessa hudgens, but i just used the name :)
VAndAsh4Ever Says:
Nov 21, 2008 - die epi war der hammer!! Freu mich schon auf die nächste!! Ist bei euch auch schnee?? XOXO Lizzy
eliilo Says:
Nov 21, 2008 - danke danke^^bei uns hat es heute nur so 5 minuten ein bisschen geschneit, aber es is derbe kalt!!
llangel012 Says:
Dec 17, 2008 - great
KamyBell Says:
Dec 22, 2008 - oooohhhh joe's still a bad boy but it makes it way more interesting! but uh-oh POO taylor!
LeaGermanyx3 Says:
Nov 20, 2008 - Ich bin so froh dass Joe augewacht ist..Freu mich schon wie es weiter geht